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08 April 2010 @ 04:53 pm
Suju's one-shot love story  

Title: Suju’s one-shot love story
Characters: Super Junior
Chapter: 06 (part A)/13 (Donghae and Eunhyuk’s chapter)
Rating: PG
Word count: 2, 262
Summary: A ‘one-chapter-per-member’ fanfic where Super Junior members’ stories are explained.

 AN: I’m giving this chapter two parts, again. Sorry if you don’t like it when I make two parts. I just made it so long again, that’s why. And besides, this chapter is about two Super Junior members, so I think its okay…I’m not expecting anyone to read this because it’s soooo long but I’d really like it if someone did read this and give me feedback. I honestly don’t know how to continue this.

Looking for past chapters?
{Chapter 1 - Hankyung}:{Chapter 2 - Siwon}:{Chapter 3 - Yesung}:{Chapter 4 - Kyuhyun}:{Chapter 5A - Heechul}:{Chapter 5B - Heechul}

The day was going slower than it usually does. The clock ticked slowly as the teacher was speaking tediously. Donghae sighed and rested his head on his desk. It was bright and sunny outside. He wanted to just run out of the room and be outside; feeling as free as the birds that he could see flying.

“I wanna go home…”

Behind him was his best friend, who seemed to be the only one listening to the teacher whilst taking notes. Eunhyuk had always tried so hard at school, but whatever he does, he just can’t seem to be as smart as everyone else. He took his glasses off as he sighed and felt the feeling of hopelessness.
Donghae lifted his head up and looked at the clock.

“Aish, it’s only been 3 minutes since I last checked.”

He, once again, laid his head back down on his desk and without noticing, his eyes were slowly shutting and within a few seconds, he’s fallen asleep.
. . . . . . . . .

At a far distance, there was a woman sitting by the tree. She was writing on the notebook she was holding. A man then suddenly came running towards the woman. Donghae couldn’t see the man’s face properly but the man seemed to have an expression of total happiness. As the woman looked up and smiled to the man, the man’s rate of speed of running has slowly decreased. Donghae felt wary. The man suddenly collapsed on the ground, his body was so still. So still. Donghae stood up and was baffled by what just happened. The woman quickly ran towards the man and yelled for help. Donghae didn’t know what to do. It was as if his body was stopping him from moving. Even though he didn’t seem to know who those two people are, he felt so useless. He started yelling at the people passing by and asking them to help the man.

“HEY! Please go help them! Something happened to the man! YOU THERE! Please help!”

It was as if no one heard him, though his voice was loud enough for everyone in the park to hear. He felt the deliberate ignorance of the people surrounding him.

. . . . . . . . .

“Yah…Yah…YAH! Wake up!
Donghae! Wake up!” 

Donghae’s eyes were still half shut as he lifted his head from his desk. He could smell someone’s bad breath. He could hear nothing but that person’s irritating voice. He tried to widen his eyes a little more to see who was waking him up. He could see that Eunhyuk’s face was just about 20cm away from his.

Donghae placed his right hand on Eunhyuk’s cheek and slowly pushed it away from him.

“Personal space, hyung. Personal space”, Donghae mumbled as he was rubbing his eyes. “What time is it, Hyuk?”

Eunhyuk sighed as he looked around the empty room, looking for the clock. He answered, “It’s already 7:00pm, class has ended but I stayed back for an hour to ask for Ms. Park’s help. I thought you’d be awake already. It’s so dark outside, wanna walk home together?”

Donghae nodded as he grabbed his bag and started walking.
. . . . . . . .  
“Yah, is it just me or is it just really dark tonight. . .” Eunhyuk asked as they were walking.

Eunhyuk’s widened eyes can’t help but look around the narrow street while they were walking. He suddenly bumped onto Donghae and asked, “w-w-why did you stop? Did you s-see something?”

“Eunhyuk. You’re walking too close to me. Personal space, yeah?”

Donghae started walking. Eunhyuk walked at the back of Donghae, making sure to keep at least a 1 meter distance from him.

Eunhyuk thought, “What’s wrong with Donghae today?”

Donghae stopped walking again.

Eunhyuk rolled his eyes, “Yah, Donghae, I’m already giving you personal sp…”

“Shut up.”


Donghae walked back towards Eunhyuk and placed his index finger on Eunhyuk’s lips.

“I said shut up.” Donghae started looking around.

“Donghae, what’s wrong?”

“Someone’s following us”

“What?! Someone’s fo…”


Eunhyuk shut his mouth close and stared at Donghae.

Donghae continued to look around and suddenly stopped and stared at the lamp post.
“Hey! Why are you following us?!”

Eunhyuk turned around to see who Donghae was talking to. He couldn’t see anyone.

“Who are you talking to, Hae?”

Donghae walked towards the lamp post. Eunhyuk couldn’t see Donghae behind the post because it was dark.

“D-donghae? Yah, don’t…don’t leave me here alone…”

Donghae came out of the dark, holding a girl with him, just about the same age as them.
“She’s been following us.”

. . . . . . . . . 

“Yah, I’m so popular, I get followed by a stalker…”, Eunhyuk smiled over-confidently.

“I’m not your stalker, baboya!” the girl finally spoke. She pushed away the fringe that was covering her face and crossed her arms.

Eunhyuk’s eyes widened and said disappointingly, “then… then y-y-you’re his stalker?!”, pointing at Donghae.

The so called ‘stalker’ rolled her eyes and felt annoyed, “I’m nobody’s stalker!”

“Then why were you following us?!” Donghae said arrogantly.

“C-cos it’s dark…”, she replied.

“And?”, Eunhyuk waited for her to continue with her explanation.

“And… I don’t like walking by myself in the dark…”

“Pshh, that’s it?!”, said Eunhyuk.

“Don’t talk like you don’t feel the same…”, coincidentally, Donghae and the ‘stalker’ said at the same time.

There was an awkward one minute silence.

Eunhyuk looked at the girl, then looked at Donghae and said, “Hae…”

Donghae responded, “What?”

“I need to pee.”

“Aigoo!”, Donghae started walking, “We’re nearly home, just hold it in. You can’t let it out right now, there’s a girl around. Aish…”

. . . . . . . . . 

The crickets made an awfully loud sound that night. It was dark and Eunhyuk desperately needed to go toilet. The walk seemed to be longer than the other walks they had every after school.

Eunhyuk sighed and tried to kill the silence, “So…”, but failed. He looked at his both sides, seeing the plain expressions Donghae and ‘the stalker’ had on their faces. It was as if they were thinking so deeply that they are out of reality.

Eunhyuk tried for the second time, “So… Did you guys hear about some students finding a girl’s dead body at the back of the school?”

Donghae answered quickly, “You believe that? You’re so gullible, as usual. It’s not true.”

The girl spoke, “It’s true! I saw the body with my own eyes!

Donghae stopped walking and argued, “Then how come no one told the teachers? How come no police came? And what happened to the body? I was there at the back of the school at lunch and didn’t see anything. Try explaining that.”

“Well..”, the girl said hesitatingly, “I saw it on someone’s phone, they took a photo of it!”

“It’s true, why can’t you just believe it, Donghae”, Eunhyuk butted in.

Donghae sighed and just tried to go with the flow, “Okay, araseo. Then I assume there’s some kind of story behind it?”

Eunhyuk’s eyes widened and felt excited and scared at the same time, “Yes, there is! You two better listen..” The three of them started walking again as Eunhyuk started telling ‘the story’. “So, 5 years ago, they said that one night, two students.. ah, to be specific, one girl and one guy, were walking after school together. On their way home, they saw a guy walking in front of them and when the guy suddenly stopped, the two students stopped. The students felt scared when the guy turned around to them. The guy looked so white, he looked dead…”

“Is there a point to this story… at all?” Donghae interrupted.

“Yah, I told you to listen! The best part is coming!” Eunhyuk sighed and continued, “So the guy looked dead and old. The guy stood still for a couple of minutes, just looking at the students. Suddenly, he winked at them and the students then screamed like crazy and ran back to the school. The old man followed them until they reached the school. The two students thought it was best to hide at the back of the school. As the two were running, the male student turned to a different path, a shortcut, assuming that the girl is still at his side. Without noticing, the girl took the other path. The two were separated. As the girl reached the back of the school, she then noticed that her friend wasn’t next to her anymore. At a dark corner, the girl saw a male figure. She yelled, “Oppa! Come here, quick!” As the light reached the figure, she noticed that the figure was the old guy that was following them. It was then said that the old guy was a masochist and killed the girl, pulled her intestines inside out.”

“Stop!” the girl couldn’t take listening anymore.

“What happened to the other student?” Donghae insisted and wanted to annoy the girl for fun.

“No one knows,” Eunhyuk answered.

Donghae felt disappointed as his plan for entertainment vanished. He sighed and continued to question, “So all in all, it was just a crazy old guy that caused this story to go around the school? Man, people have no life these days that they make up stories to entertain themselves.”

As Donghae continued to grumble, the sound of footsteps was suddenly heard by Eunhyuk. “Y-y-yah , do you guys hear that?”

“Hear what?” the two responded.

“The sound just then”! Eunhyuk turned around to see if anyone or anything was at the back of them. There was nothing.

“This is why I don’t like hearing or telling scary stories,” Eunhyuk complained, “you get this effect after. Aigoo, I swear, this walk is so long, are we even taking the right path?!”

The three of them looked around and noticed that, due to being so into Eunhyuk’s story, they have taken the wrong path home. The path they’ve taken was dark and isolated.

“Okay, okay! Let’s quickly go back and find the right path” Eunhyuk said with fear on his tone.

Donghae sighed and said, “What’s wrong? This street is just as dark as the other streets. Why are you scared for? Alright, let’s go back.” Donghae turned around but bumped the girl because he didn’t know she was at his back. “Ah, sorry.”

Bali! I want to go home now! That reminds me; mum cooked her special fish dish…” Eunhyuk’s stomach made a sound, “I’m hungry…let’s go.”
. . . . . . . . .
It took just another 15 minutes for the three of them to arrive at Eunhyuk’s place. He invited Donghae and the girl in but they refused and reasoned that they, too, wanted to go home already. “Okay”, said Eunhyuk, “you’re gonna miss out on my mum’s special fish dish… See you tomorrow then.” He waved at the two as he closed the gate.

Right after the gate was closed, Donghae stared at the girl for a moment with a plain expression.

“Ga Eun.” Donghae spoke so softly as he was looking at the girl, “I hope this doesn’t happen again.”

“I’m sorry” Ga Eun apologized as she looked away, avoiding eye contact, “I just needed someone to go home with me, and I found you guys, so I.."

Donghae interrupted, “I . . . I already forgot about everything... But here you are again. You don’t know how much I . . .”, Donghae sighed and looked away, “I liked you, so much, but I hope . . . I hope we won’t meet like today again. I don’t want Eunhyuk to know about any of what happened. I just don’t want to go through again what happened before.” Donghae looked down as he remembered what happened a couple of years ago. He started walking back and waved bye to Ga Eun.

“I’m sorry”, Ga Eun whispered so softly as she watched Donghae walk away and slowly vanish in the dark.

. . . . . . . . . .
It was two years ago that Ga Eun and Donghae first met. It was not only Donghae, but also his best friend, Yoo Min, who fell in love with Ga Eun. Both didn’t expect that they’d treat each other like enemies because of a girl, but that’s how it happened. Yoo Min, who was overly sensitive, stressed over the fact that he had to choose between friendship and love. This caused Yoo Min to realize that the only choice he had was to get rid of himself in order to give others happiness. One morning, Yoo Min’s mother found his bedroom window broken and found traces of blood on the broken glass.

Till then, Donghae and Ga Eun decided to never speak or see each other again and to bury all the memories they had between the three of them. 

. . . . . . . . .
It was already 9pm when Donghae arrived home. He went straight in his room, threw his bag on the floor and hugged his bed. He laid down so still when suddenly he felt his phone from his pocket vibrating.

“Huh? Who could’ve messaged me at this time?”, Donghae wondered whilst he sat down on his bed and grabbed his phone from his pocket.

*1 message received

From: Eunhyuk

Fishy, I think I’m in love.

Donghae breathed heavily and thought about that he just read, “This can’t be.”


AN: This is so crap.

Current Mood: crankycranky
♪♫: I Was Wrong - 2AM
xapplekiss on April 8th, 2010 08:49 am (UTC)
Cathy: big bangyouandme_94 on April 9th, 2010 04:54 am (UTC)
thanks for reading! (:
& for saying it's not crap. XD
i'll try and post the next part soon...
xapplekiss on April 9th, 2010 07:51 am (UTC)
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Cathyyouandme_94 on April 9th, 2010 04:56 am (UTC)
hehe, homework's stopping me from going LJ. >_< but the two weeks holidays gave me time to continue this. XD haven't been anywhere, really. just needed time. ^_^
rubycookiejar on April 9th, 2010 10:32 pm (UTC)
....oh....my...god O_O. So sad... Will Eunhyuk's love story connect to this one?
Cathy: 2PMyouandme_94 on April 10th, 2010 01:54 am (UTC)
Eunhyuk & Donghae's story is together. so this one that you just finished reading is both eunhyuk's and donghae's. part b os this chapter will be posted as soon as i finshed. ^^

& thanks for reading! ^o^V
ai_sumairuai_sumairu on April 12th, 2010 10:29 am (UTC)
OMG!!!!!!! T______________T Best friends fighting because of a girl... That's just the saddest thing ever. And nooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Hyukkie... Please not that girl. NOT HER PLEASE!!!!! T^T It's okay if it's Hae but not that girl!!!!! D;
Cathy: dbskyouandme_94 on April 13th, 2010 09:59 am (UTC)
OMG! you commented on each chapter! you're awesome. (:

& well, we'll see on the next chapter...^^
hiddenportrait on April 18th, 2010 04:55 am (UTC)
Oh my, No way! I didn't expect that at all. xD
LOL this is exactly what I'm going through right now! lol
Cathy: snsdyouandme_94 on April 19th, 2010 06:33 am (UTC)
this is what you're going through right now? omg. O_O

& thanks for reading. ^^,
カレン170683 on April 18th, 2010 10:21 am (UTC)
Cathyyouandme_94 on April 19th, 2010 06:35 am (UTC)
WHY DID YOU HAVE TO READ IT?! i feel so ..idk, cos you're stories are awesome compared to my crappy ones..T_T
but thanks! (:
カレン: eviljuicebox.170683 on April 19th, 2010 06:48 am (UTC)
BULLKRAPP! Your stories are amazing! Especially the twists, like how Donghae and that girl ended up knowing each other. My stories are... Blah. But yours are awesome! Don't lie to me, Cathy.
Cathyyouandme_94 on April 19th, 2010 06:56 am (UTC)
why thank you for telling another lie. jokes. okay, if you say they are, then fine.

btw, when are you gonna start writing again?!!
カレン: stressed.170683 on April 19th, 2010 07:26 am (UTC)
When I get a new idea. And I really can't think of one. Not one good enough for a multichapter. ):
Lahaelalahaela on April 19th, 2010 06:01 am (UTC)
Really didn't expect that....I didn't feel like Eunhyuk had any interaction with Ga Eun at all on their walk home anyway [one walk and he's in love? that was fast...]
Still, there better be a sequel or something because HAE AND HYUK can NOT fight over a girl! XD

Nice job writing, rather interesting~
Cathyyouandme_94 on April 19th, 2010 06:37 am (UTC)
that's what i think too. Hae and Hyuk cannot fight over a girl. lets just see when i finish writing part b. (:

& thank you. (:
anneyeong_love on March 22nd, 2011 04:54 am (UTC)
Please update!! <3